I love writing fan fics and thought I'd give TC a try. I wrote three scenes. I am not that good of a writer like you guys are so please bare with me. Three scenes isn't a lot but I would like to get your opinions. I should probably write the whole episode first. Please comment on what you think so far. It is in script format. ------------------------------------------------------ Scene 1 Many moons away there is a planet called Plun-Darr. The blue sky has become a dirty orange color. The oceans have become nothing but a sea of flames. Trees and flowers is nothing but a long ago memory. Slithe, the king of the lizards, looks up in the sky as a shadow of darkness cover him like a big blanket. The sky has been taken over by vultures. Slithe: (To himself) That is not a good sign. Slithe's second in command Zaza runs towards him and is yelling as he gets closer. Zaza losses control and if it wasn't for a small rock in the way that knocked him off his feet he would have crashed into Slithe. Zaza: You won't believe it Slithe...You won't believe it... Slithe: Talk you fool. Zaza: The jackals...the jackals...they are leaving. Slithe: They are? Slithe looks up again. Slithe: The vultures are leaving as well. Zaza: There is nothing left on Plun-Darr. The war against the vultures and jackals have destroyed this planet. We will have to leave as well. Slithe: I am not abandoning Plun-Darr. With the flying monkeys and the brainless jackals gone...I will rule Plun-Darr. Zaza: There is nothing left to rule. Slithe smacks Zaza. Suddenly the earth starts to shake and crack. Flames are escaping from the cracks in the earth. Slithe: Seem like you do have a brain cell after all. Get the ships ready. Zaza: Where will we go Slithe? Slithe looks up at the sky again. Far away is another planet Thundera. Slithe gets an evil grin on his green face. Slithe: Why are you still here Zaza? Zaza nods and runs away. Scene 2 Lion-O looks at a big wall that is outside of Cat’s Castle. Lion-O gets a flashback of when he was just a young cub. Voice Over (Jaga): A hundred Thunderian years ago there was a King. He was the lord of the Thundercats but power darkened his heart. He enslaved his own people. The scene cuts to a young Lion-O looking at the wall inquisitively. Lion-O: What happened to him Jaga? Jaga: That is a story for when you are much older my dear Lion-O. Lion-O: Jaga I am not a cub anymore. I am old enough. Jaga starts to laugh. Jaga: Sure you are. Lion-O’s flashback ends. He looks down at Snarf who is licking his paw. Lion-O: You know Snarf. Jaga never told me the rest of the story. Snarf: Snarf Snarf. Jaga comes out of the castle. He sees Lion-O standing in front of the wall. He walks up to him. Jaga: Prince Lion-O. Lion-O: You never told me the rest of the story Jaga. Jaga: Didn’t I. Lion-O: No you said I was too young. I am not anymore. Jaga: No you are not. You want to hear the rest of the story. Lion-O: Yes Jaga. I want to know what happened to this cruel King. Jaga: Then I shall tell you my young Prince. Jaga turns around and walks to the fountain and sits on the edge. Lion-O follows and sits in front of Jaga. Scene 3 Wilykat and Wilykit are standing behind a tree. They are looking at Cat’s Castle. Wilykit: It is much bigger than I thought it would be Kat. Wilykat: It is. Wilykit: How are we going to get in? It must be guarded. Wilykat: If there is a way we will find it Kit. Wilykit: It must be beautiful inside. Everything must be made of gold. Wilykat: Floors of gold… Wilykit: Windows of gold… Wilykat: Beds of gold… Wilykit: And lots of food. Kit sees the food floatiing around her head. he floating food disspareas when Kat's stomach makes a growling sound. Kat and Kit runs towards the castle. Kit: Suddenly I don't think it is such a good idea. If they catch us we would go to the dungeons. I am too young to go to the dungeons. Kat: We just have to be smart. Besides we need to see him. He will be the only one that could help us. Kit: What if he can't? Kat: I saw him before Kit. Kat's sees an image of Tygra in his mind. Kat: We came a long way. We can't leave until we see him. Kit gives a sigh. Kit: Time to think of a plan to get in. Kat: I think I may have one. Come on Kit. Kat and Kit runs towards the castle's gate.