Awesome chapter, Hammy! The Sword of Omens can warn Lion-O of danger now, just like how OS Lion-O's sword warns him of danger.
Great job on part 4 hammy. Now That the Sword of Omens can warn Lion-O of danger it will be harder for Mumm-Ra to surprise attack them. And I wounder what Bengali was doing to get him self in prison.????? Cant Wait for part 5!!!
Feels like 90% is dialogue, not a fan of that at all. Just read the first part but by scrolling down it looks like it. I could be wrong so just tell me.
Since I'm writing it less as a book and more as an actual TV show, there is a lot more dialogue than usual. I think it just made it seem more fit with the TV show, considering it's supposed to directly follow it.
I'll take it like a boss. Or rather, I'll pull my hair out, then take it like a boss. Guess the whole she's-still-in-there thing might have been fake....No, it's something worse.